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Gemna and Crimson Celebrate the Fourth of July

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Happy fireworks day, everyone!  Wanted to make sure this got posted before the day was over.  Hope you all enjoy the view!

Gemna is the property of :iconpokemongirl8:

Crimson is the property of :iconstepfordcrimson:
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

The colors are bright & i like the the theme that you went with, but this is a basic stereotype image of someones 4th of July & it could use some more background, i can't really say what you should use, but i do think maybe a park, or a beach setting, or maybe try a city theme. but all in all the characters are good but the background setting is the only thing that needs work. also i think that maybe you put a little to much work & emphasis on the characters, so for the next pic try balancing out both.